Stealth-Logic's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Life is passing]

Your english needs work here. You have the preposition 'into' modifying the verb 'live', and since 'into' is used to denote that an action causes entry into a place (which in this context would be the internet), and 'live' is not a verb that indicates movement, this sentence makes no sense. It should be 'in' not 'into' to indicate that 'the internet' is the place where the subject is living. And I agree with that other guy. The kerning on this is atrocious.

Improper word usage and typography aside, it's a cool concept, and the headstones look pretty good.

[for max]

Best.

[Freya]

I absolutely despise furries and furrie like stuff, but this is pretty neat. Kinda Thundercats-ish.

[Sexy Demon Teacher from HELL!!]

I like the jagged cell shading in your coloring, and your style is pretty unique, but that demon chick needs some hips man. Awesome titties aren't the only key thing to remember when drawing the fairer sex. Waist to hip ratio is crucial in drawing female form. One of the major features that distinguishes women from men is that a woman's hips are generally wider than her waist. Just something to keep in mind in the future. Keep it up yo, you got potential!

PyroToaster responds:

Thanks for your review, I will attempt those changes tomorrow since they are embarrassing mistakes

[Sobotnik my original character]

Haha, this is awesome. Too bad you told me not to steal. I was going to burgle him away to lock up in my pleasure basement.

TerminalMontage responds:

Thank you! I had to do the best I could to keep him safe.

[Kick!]

That must be one nasty cut there on her foot. Lookit all that blood!

Haha, sorry, thats just what I saw when I first looked at it.

[Raspberry Knight]

The mall.

x-factor11 responds:

the mall would have just the most FABULOUS pink armor!

I'll draw him in JCpennys!