I like the jagged cell shading in your coloring, and your style is pretty unique, but that demon chick needs some hips man. Awesome titties aren't the only key thing to remember when drawing the fairer sex. Waist to hip ratio is crucial in drawing female form. One of the major features that distinguishes women from men is that a woman's hips are generally wider than her waist. Just something to keep in mind in the future. Keep it up yo, you got potential!